Review Detail of MatchaMilk in Out in the Strange Lands

Interesting world-building and premise. I'm excited to see that Aurelia is going to become the only female Auror and can't wait how her journey leads up to it. The writing style is good. It's descriptive and visual, especially the opening paragraph made me want to read more. It immerses and makes the reader feel like they're with Aurelia. However, sometimes the writing feels a bit too descriptive and I feel like we don't need to know every little action Aurelia does. I can't wait to read more tho!