Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Garou of WTF???

You ruined it when you summoned this “Wild” dude (I have no idea who he is or where he’s from) and now you made the focus seem like it’s Mc AND this Wild dude. Boring... 7 chapters in and they become best friends , train together and such and now they are BOTH super op. Just lame. Would’ve been better if he didn’t share his power with other people. Or what you said in the chapter of this “Wild” dude telling mc to summon other characters so they could share their “Glory”. So much Grammar mistakes as well. It ruins the flow of the story. I’ll delete this review when I actually start enjoying the story but I don’t see that happening