Item: Eldritch Scion
Rating: 4

amaturewriterLv44yr

2020-03-07 03:27

DAMN...like god DAMN....the octopus god....kinda nice that he of all people feels some pity for MC...........basically MC got ****ed by everyone from lover to family to his goddess,,,then an ancient one took pity on him and well made him an eldritch..............its interesting... suggestion.....make MC like ainz [you know who] with the powers of necromancy from solo leveling,,,make him dark...not evil rapy **** but like you mess with him you die....I dont want to read some SAW ****,,,,,.also do provide some info...cause I dont know much of the lovecraft universe..........add some romance and fluff.......if harem keep it small...dude deserves some romance....just dont make it some shallow ****...or some NTR ****,,,,build romance,,,,,,,,,make MC OP...also for romance dont separate the lovers...............anyway GL..

Eldritch Scion

Billiam2920

Not enough ratings

11 Chs

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Billiam2920Author

Thanks for the review! Mc will be more of a solo guy who serves his own justice. I never liked the saw stuff myself so thats not gonna be an issue although there will horrors there won’t be senseless torture. As for lore I’ll do some explaining but it’s very loose on the actual Lovecraftian Mythos, more like inspiration and a whole lot of homebrew than actual basing. He will have a small harem, every good Eldritch God needs a cult right? Apart from the first interaction which will be expanded on later in the story all other interests will be fleshed out and meaningful if they are permanent additions.

4yr

amaturewriterLv4

do provide some info pls.....solo dude is dope....as for romance,,,,dont make it NTR or moms.......or just dont go the Chinese route.....get what I mean? ie: ****ty romance where the gets interested in MC only if he strong or MC has to grow strong to get her cause she dosnt want to leave her clan some BS of MC raping the chick for some BS reason or the lovers are separated////////try to build the romance...keep it happy and fluff [the romance]

Billiam2920:Thanks for the review! Mc will be more of a solo guy who serves his own justice. I never liked the saw stuff myself so thats not gonna be an issue although there will horrors there won’t be senseless torture. As for lore I’ll do some explaining but it’s very loose on the actual Lovecraftian Mythos, more like inspiration and a whole lot of homebrew than actual basing. He will have a small harem, every good Eldritch God needs a cult right? Apart from the first interaction which will be expanded on later in the story all other interests will be fleshed out and meaningful if they are permanent additions.

4yr

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