Review Detail of StupidNovel in Ascenders Rift

Whenever there is a dialogue in the chapter, It's get cringe. Like how MC keep talking to himself like a kid, or when MC do some action to kill a beast but keep talking to himself like a madman. I can't get past 10 chapter. Please tell me if it will get better in the later chapter. Cause at this point, I can't read it cause it keep makes me cringe all the time and skip an amount of chapter