It's seems interesting has a fairly good beginning.im hopeing the olo boy or whatever his name is( to lasy to go back to correct the spelling of his name!) Will jump into the pool to survive.looking forward to new chapters.i have only the slightest of complaints.the spaceing between paragraphs.its to much combine some of them.
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