Review Detail of amaturewriter in Look for the new one under fan fic at 6-7 pm, has the same title

go **** yourself ya prick.................................................the hells wrong with you? posting this **** here, this should be in the FF genre, I found this by luck...whats your deal?..you dont want people to read this piece of art? you dont want recognition for this piece of art or what?....prick... honestly, this is quite nice, I enjoyed it..all I say is continue...make MC smart, OP, cold and ruthless, no mercy towards anyone that fucks with him, kill em....add some romance and fluff, just build it, but no wife stealing, moms or **** like that, **: just saying for romance, try something new, not jean, but some new character like an OC or someone that isnt used so much,.....just build the relationships and dont make it shallow and ****ty.... Also I would say that I kinda dont like the stupid thing of MC and wolverine headbutting and pointlessly arguing, dont do it, it seems like some anime ****....if wolverine dosnt like MC, well make MC crush him...other than that, its all good.. Anyway GL, also post this in FF, I found this by pure luck