Review Detail of GonadSmasher08 in Has been rewrite

Well this work needs alot more work. The potential or power of the MC is not well used. If he wishes to remain hidden, he can do alot of things. He can make a far more intelligent AI than jarvis. He can make a far more sophisticated cloaking or masking device. Damn! He can hack different bank account to make him rich by using his aliens. Gray matter or brainstorm. Grammar need a lot of tweaking. Story development is average. Dear author, for a good story just imagine your self as the MC and what will you do in different situation and what will be the best outcome.