Review Detail of PotatoKeeper in Has been rewrite

The chapter is still few so i cannot say anything but this fanfic have some good point in my eyes hehehehe. I like MC personality. He have good vision but some time bit Sully and native i think. But this is how call young. But story' still don't have solid wolrd build and Chara build because it's still few but i hope i can see in more chapter ahead. So my opinnion here is just try read and you don't regret it 😁