Review Detail of SHEOGORATH in Shadow of the Mist (paused)

A great Novel Author ! Keep up the good work . The start is pretty interesting since it is rare to see a fanfic protagonist find himself in prison, especially in Naruto . The rest is also well done . Anyway it is a good novel and all what i had to say about it beside one thing.......DAMN 140 CHARACTERS THING !!!!!!!!!!!!