Review Detail of Schnee_ in Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

WHAT I HATE THE MOST IS THE AUTHOR FORGOTTEN THE MC BACKGROUND I ADVICE HIM TO READ HIS OWN BOOK AND STUDY THEM AND FIND HIS ERRORS LIKE MC BACKGROUND HE IS REINCARNATED SOUL AND NOT NATURALLY BORN THERE SO HE MUST HAVE A KNOWLEDEGE OF SOUL LAND CUZ IT CLEARLY SAID HE LOVES READING AND SOULD LAND IS ONE OF THE TOP NOVEL

I would recommend you to read the author's notes, where it is clearly explained that he lost his memories for a reason that will be known in the tournament. As for their appearance, Tang Wulin and Tang Wutong do not resemble their parents, he hopes that the story advances before casting criticism on the background of the character, because not everything is explained in the first chapters. You really look ridiculous, you think you're a very direct and observant person for criticizing those points when you overlook all the important details, don't be ashamed and delete this review.

nahhh man your wak.... you just said it yourself. He wrote it in the authors notes not in the story........ like how tf are we supposed to know he suddenly forgets everything he knew when it isnt stated in the story ???? Plus throughout the story he mentions curtain parts he shouldnt know if that was the case. Many examples but one is saying where he wont let his sis go out with oscar and follow the dumb circus or something. So clearly he knows the story but authors just using it for convenience, something I despise cause it makes no fcking sense. I agree with schnee tbh dont mind the looks cause tbh I grampa swords look better. However this could have easily been sorted out by writing about a mutation during birth where sword used his sp to help with the birth or something. Just lazy writing. Could have even just said he got his genes from sword and hes a distant relative or something. Finally the thing that prob annoyed me most wasnt even how he forgot everything. Its the whole writing. I mean the block writing is bad enough then author goes and adds all the symbols and monologs every other line. Theres something called spacing out... his whole training arc I skipped cause I found it just so annoying to read. Plus when he did that test like my god why must you make a 1000 year move that complicated... all you had to say was he gains 25% atk while decreasing his opponents by 25%. not a whole chapter.. To me the story could have been interesting with his sword de buffing his enemies while buffing his at the same time then with his sword intent he could become op. However he suddenly becomes a defensive swordsmen ?? why ?? whats the point of his de buffs if his fighting style is defending ??? Obv to make him weaker for the story to me the author has butchered his own story.

Writing is not good, but that is not something that is solved overnight, it takes time and practice. I agree that I should have published it in the story, I think the change was very sudden and badly explained, but that's another thing I hope will improve with time, after all he's a novice writer. As for the defensive swordsman, I agree with you.

With the writing people should have criticised him at the times then and once he improves go back and re write it. However even if he is a novice these are some basic and glaring mistakes that from what I can see have no improvement so see no point in reading this story as it butchers it. Hopefully author learns from this if he ever wants to improve cause the ideas there.. 'badly explained' ? It wasnt explained at all.. xD

Hahaha, well that depends on the reader, if someone wants to stop reading at this point is very understandable, I personally will not stop reading until I explain why he lost his memory, if I'm not satisfied with the explanation then look for another novel.

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It's about time they solved that problem, that makes my reading a lot easier.

I don't really like that review with all the **** and hate. For the other hand I'm always glad for a constructive review so good work Isoma. Yeah my writing it can be improved and is the main objective of writing. And yeah the spacing where awful. For the Openess, some people thinks that is needed but in my opinion is not necessary and at the long term it destroys a little the story. He is a defensive swordmaster with adapts to his control system, in the future it will change. To finish, I know a lot of critizing of the memories but say after his spirit awakening there's specially reincarnated think and if I don't forget one after his second ring there shouldn't be any reference to any previous knowledge. This is the main plot of the story when I started writing it. That I want to keep, even the MC doesn't know about, it's not like a hit on the head or something physical. So I see normal to not explain as part of the story until the MC arrived there. And for when it will be reveled. There will be a little insight in his 4th ring hunting and at the continental tournament it will be reveled all.

Bwuahaha

In a way, you makes good point since the Mc seems like an idiot at times. But you have to know, as humans, we forget things. The Mc has been through so much, especially at the time he got his first spirit ring. I think one of those events lead his memory to fragment, some kind of higher power at work here or just plainly he forgot.

Why not point out the mistakes and try to help the author instead of complaining about the quality and not point out the mistake? I’m so confused, why do some readers think criticizing writers without pointing out the mistake is a great idea? It doesn’t help anyone, not even you. At least tell him the plot holes, or grammar mistakes when you see them.

Keep up the good work! Remember, there are people who support and there are those that hates. Those that hates are separated into two kinds, the ones that have a reason and the ones with outrageous reason. Always search and learn from those with reasons and ignore those with outrageous reasons. Like some of the people above. Some talk about how bad the story is now while whining about absolutely nothing and not addressing the reason for why they are unpleased. Some address the reason but a very confusing reason. I don’t understand why being a defensive swordsman is a bad thing. After all, isn’t the Mc a Control type spirit master? And he can literally buff himself like an attack type spirit master while debuffing enemies like a control type. He’s also a food type auxiliary spirit master. Tell me, if he isn’t op, what is? These people probably have just started to read novels and prefer the op fast kind of main characters. Literally, that is all I can get from the discussion above and I feel like you are insulted as a writer. Sure, Harem and Opness is great but the journey towards that is too. So tune them out and keep being a great author! They don’t deserve your time and will never deserve your time unless they change.

ALL I WANT TO KNOW AND SAY IS ABOUT HIS MEMORY WHAT HAPPENED TO IT SOMETIMES HE KNOW A BOUT FUTURE BUT SOMETIMES HE DON'T KNOW ANYTHING ITS JUST LIKE HE DOES'T KNOW AT ALL CARE TO EXPLAIN IT IN YOUR BOOK BECAUSE WITHOUT EXPLANATION I DON'T KNOW OR WE DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPEN TO HIS MEMORY AT ALL

Did in a previous post....

Ya, I saw it. You made a few solid point there and the author can probably improve from your help.

LOL that's stupid reason hahahahaha

LOL that's stupid reason hahahahaha

Stupid but it’s reasonable and acceptable tho. The real unrealistic ones here are the Mcs that spend years in another world and remember everything. Especially the ones that are reincarnated, how can you think and remember complicated things but can’t move your limbs. Sure, maybe it’s because newborns have little to no muscle but the brain also shouldn’t be fully developed either

You should stop reading novels if that's what you think. idiot!! 😂😂😂😂 Your just old that you think it's normal to forget everything....