Not bad, I just have two complaints. First, almost every chapter is an info dump so far, quite boring. Second, don't offer God tier power if the mc will just refuse it, it's just baiting and annoying.
xShadowDancer
Liked it!
MÖGENHi there, thanks for the review. You may not have read the synopsis, but I clearly stated that the story will have a slower start (of approx 10 chapters), before it actually gets going. The info dumps are just to build a foundation for the story, and I already separated the volumes to indicate that. :)
xShadowDancer:Hi there, thanks for the review. You may not have read the synopsis, but I clearly stated that the story will have a slower start (of approx 10 chapters), before it actually gets going. The info dumps are just to build a foundation for the story, and I already separated the volumes to indicate that. :)
Maurz:Doesn't change the fact that its unnecessarily long, moreso than it should be