Your idea is very good, but your paragraphs are long, for those who use automatic translator, several lines are missing, and it is very tiring, reading 1 paragraph of 20 lines ... I only managed to get to chapter 4, and I already consider a lot.
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MÖGENWhat the bloody hell are you talking about I'm American and it's too short you see I like reading novels and from my perspective you would like reading children's comics those paperback flimsy thing with only three pages don't listen to them guy or girl or or whoever or whatever you are keep up the good work.
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