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Bierbart
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Might have potential but the grammar has a lot of potential to get better. the quality is maybe around mtl. Furthermore the MC is pretty much a wimo till half of the updated chapters. Till that point its slightly cliche. Even with the wimpstyle move of " the former body user was trash" i have to amend/get hot for his wrongdoings

In another world with True Administrator power

LordNoname

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LordNoname
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Thanks for reviewing the Novel. :3 I will try to improve my grammar. How do you think a MC should act in this situation? Give me some advice, it will be helpful, I will take them as reference :3

Yunoo_Qtt
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trash story