Truth is, I have reservations reading this. The beginning is a drag and I'm not sure with grammatical errors. My English is not that good as well. I can't judge. Though, its good enough for me because I understand the message she tries to convey. As others who rated before me, I can feel the emotions from her words. Though, it's not perfect, it has piqued my interest. As I know, this the author's first book. She still updates and fixes the errors time to time. I only wish she gets better as well. Based on my observations, her writing is improving from the first chapters. The story gets interesting too. Her updates are okay. Understand writers needs time. Just keep up! Don't rush it and take your time. Characters are lovable . I love the interactions and feelings from each of them. Author tries her best to introduce them as they interact with each other. There are still so many mysterious people and hopes to meet them soon. The world creation is interesting. I know this is a magical world. I understand some oddities on it. Simply, Im enjoying this. Thank you for your efforts.
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