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Review Detail of M_sama in Prime Originator

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dropped at around chapter 550. given that i try to complete almost every LN, this one was bad. I think the 18+ material detracts from the story rather than add to it. The affection is always one sided from the harem members with the mc just caring about nutting. Even as a smut the writer is not a good erotica writer and instead just lowers the quality of his story. if this story had no smut/sex it would be rated much higher. The Mc thinks having sex is Romantic and only does that every 3rd chapter in form of badly written porn. The overall story is good and the world setting is nice. The badly written romance/sex was getting too much for me so i had to drop it despite liking the other parts of the novel.

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