Review Detail of Eslyna in Conquering One Piece

Other than the MCs past life story, I felt that the novel was pretty bad. Mistakes in grammer and forgeting words at some places, story developed way toooo fast, already met canon charscters... Killed people 2nd chaptet still confused about that, the story was a bit of a mess... Like the olot not thought of otherthsn the end and prologue? Lastly it looks like author gave up this booj so put 2 for updates as it might just bebslow or mightve given up