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World design and its background could use some work, and for sure everything is you did was best your writing skill to your imagination was pure.

The Genesis Trilogy

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Thank you for your feedback. I am still editing most of the chapters. Don't worry I will have those issues you mentioned fixed. I appreciate your words, thank you!