Going be a bit shameless and give myself five stars. Deal with it. I just wanted to say something to those who want to review my work. Criticism is accepted if there are reasons and tips on how to improve. If possible, don't review just because you want exp or hate on it without reason. Try to review what it is that you liked or disliked about the story. I see this done to a lot of other people's stories and I guess I just want to know what I did well and what might have been a mistake. If someone comments about what I should do or what I should take out of the story I probably won't listen to it since, as it's my story, I do whatever I want with it. This story was made to improve myself and see how far my writing can take me. Not to create the perfect story (Although that sounds good) Some may like it, some may drop it. But if you decide to give it a go, thanks in advance. Thank you for reading my story, and I hope to see you guys again.
BrotherBook
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MÖGENThe MC is a bit of a hero type so you may not like him that much. Especially a couple scenes in the first part that I didn’t completely think through much to my regret. I can’t force people to read what they don’t like, but I at least urge you to try a few chapters before completely dropping the book. But regardless of what you do, thank you for giving this book a shot.
Golias:a question, I read the first chapter, I really don’t like mc’s “heroes”, I don’t know if your mc has this aspect of “good person”, if he does I won’t read it, but if it’s only in the beginning, could you tell me?
The MC is a bit of a hero type so you may not like him that much. Especially a couple scenes in the first part that I didn’t completely think through much to my regret. I can’t force people to read what they don’t like, but I at least urge you to try a few chapters before completely dropping the book. But regardless of what you do, thank you for giving this book a shot.
Golias:a question, I read the first chapter, I really don’t like mc’s “heroes”, I don’t know if your mc has this aspect of “good person”, if he does I won’t read it, but if it’s only in the beginning, could you tell me?
The MC is a bit of a hero type so you may not like him that much. Especially a couple scenes in the first part that I didn’t completely think through much to my regret. I can’t force people to read what they don’t like, but I at least urge you to try a few chapters before completely dropping the book. But regardless of what you do, thank you for giving this book a shot.
Golias:a question, I read the first chapter, I really don’t like mc’s “heroes”, I don’t know if your mc has this aspect of “good person”, if he does I won’t read it, but if it’s only in the beginning, could you tell me?
I like good guy mcs And antai heros but ill only read if there is a harem lol Dont like villan mcs tho i cant even play as a vampire in skyrhim without feeling shitty
BrotherBook:The MC is a bit of a hero type so you may not like him that much. Especially a couple scenes in the first part that I didn’t completely think through much to my regret. I can’t force people to read what they don’t like, but I at least urge you to try a few chapters before completely dropping the book. But regardless of what you do, thank you for giving this book a shot.
BrotherBook:The MC is a bit of a hero type so you may not like him that much. Especially a couple scenes in the first part that I didn’t completely think through much to my regret. I can’t force people to read what they don’t like, but I at least urge you to try a few chapters before completely dropping the book. But regardless of what you do, thank you for giving this book a shot.