Very good story. But now you are at this point you should slow down,give more detail. Because if you continue like this you will end this story in 40 chapters. And feel more like a summary than a story ...
AidenCanis
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at least well get a complete story rather than a stopped one
True, but at least we have a STORY in hiatus no a "summary" a quick telling of events ...