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I've only read the first 10 chapters so I don 't really have much to say at this point. The title and system are kind of misleading. I was expecting something chtulu related or some other eldritch horror kind of thing. But it ended up being a Videogame Shop system instead. The MC is pretty much a blank slate at this point. We have been shown zero backstory, background, or motivations up to this point and he pretty much acts pretty randomly though he's kind of an asshole most of the time. The thing with the chickens was pretty cold-blooded.

Eldritch Shop System (DROPPED)

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I'm so sorry that you didn't like it.. I'm really bad at making the motivations to move the story along, as i don't have any experience in writing.. (tbh i'm scared to think about the future)