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Just stumbled across this while looking for BL novels to read. So far, so good on the plot line. There are a few grammar errors, but everyone makes mistakes so don’t worry about it too much. Keep going! Looking forward to them actually getting together! 😄👍🏻 and the smut! Lol. By the way, don’t apologize for NSFW chapters. Just mark it as NSFW 18+ and leave it at that. Same for POV changes. I suggest you just doing something like ~~Dana POV~~ that’s all.

From this point on I will be happy [BL]

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Thank you! I will keep it in mind, since there are more of the "nice scenes" to come.