Well written, decent word lengths, I don't know about the grammar but for me it's good enough. I wonder what wish will you ask, there's quite a lot of fanfics that wish for zenkai, training sets, or more power, but yeah, they never really finish their fics so I don't really mind whatever you wish as long you have goal in mind....
Heavenly_Lion
Liked it!
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