Review Detail of 90751052 in We Can Trek It

Interesting start for the writing contest! The way the characters interacted made them feel real. I'm looking forward to seeing more and how you will integrate all parts of the prompt! There aren't any errors per se in grammar, but there are tons of awkward sentences and run-ons that could be split to sound better. Make sure to add a cover someday! Keep it up author! >3</