The book had great potential. But the grammatical errors and fast pace mars its beauty. Keep up your good work. I am sure you will improve with time. But I must say that the grammatical errors make it hard to read. So, get an editor or proofreader, if possible. Or use Grammarly. Good luck!
ILLYAchan
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MÖGENILLYAchan:Thank you for your advice! It encouraged me to proofread the earlier chapters once more. ^ ^