Review Detail of chonnie in Mystical Encounters

I think this novel genuinely has so much potential; where its only hindered by a little bit of technical and pacing issues. While there were some events I'm not fond of (for example in Chapter 2? I think there was this girl who tried to fight the mc and lost against her. I think it wasn't as fleshed out as it could be). In the beginning, it's a little bit confusing due to the quick pace, but it definitely helped keep the plot interesting. What I loved most was the world building aspect. I loved the descriptions of the creatures in the world. Overall, the only thing this novel really needs is polishing. I'm hype to see where the story goes :) Kudos to the author and keep writing!!