This story has a lot of potential to develop. I like how different Pov are shown to illustrate things. Although there were some grammatical mistakes which can be clearly seen in the first few chapters, you can tell that the author has put in alot of effort to improve. Make the chapers slightly longer as well. Stability of updates: 5/5 i am new here so i am not sure but i will give it 5/5 Story development: Has potential Character design: 5/5 World background: 5/5 hope future chapters will illustrate more
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