Review Detail of GabrielDetchans in I’ll reach the stars and moon for you

This is the work of a non native speaker who is struggling to write her first story. She is trying her best and I want to encourage her. Because of that reason I will be lenient with my review. The good points: The story is interesting and the mc is well designed. The interactions with her friend is the best of the story. The faceslapping scenes are actually very good. Also there are a few moments that made me laugh a lot. The secondary characters need more development but hopefully this will happen in later chapters. The creative use of emoticons is well applied by the Author. The bad points: Grammar. Spelling. Wall text. Urgent need for edition, especially the earlier chapters. And it needs a new synopsis. But she is a begginer and this things usually happen at all non-native english speakers at the beginning. Give it a try! I am sure the Author will appreciate your interest in her work!