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This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 11. Chapters are short, so the story thus far is limited to an introductionary scene, a flashback and a school reunion party. It is, all in all a confusing read. Stars. Writing: Two stars. Poor English. Add that the syntax is for a phone-chat which makes for an extremely strange read for someone like me who sits behind a laptop watching one emoticon after another pop up on the screen. Updates. 11 chapters. No complaints. Five stars. Story. It works. Start in medias res, flashback for some background and tie those two scenes together for the reunion party. Four stars. Character. Up until now we're seeing names rather than persons. And there are a lot of names to boot. This one is bound to get better as more chapters are added to the story. Three stars. World. The setting consists of brand names, be they bags or buildings, but there is very little setting given for those of us who are unfamiliar with those brands. Three stars.
I’ll reach the stars and moon for you
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anne_2:I really appreciate your honesty of reviewing my work. At this i can motivate my self to do more and exert more in making the quality of this book on high. Thank you so much
Actually i never seen it as harsh i thinking of it as an inspiration. No worries i needed this kind of views. I know its my first time on this field and i needed to exert more to prove my self so the more the negative view the more should i strive to survived.... in real life i face much worst scenario that ones experienced, so its really ok. And again thank you😊