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j0sejalap3n0
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Now I was planning on writing a new review much later but someone upset me today by putting tags of my story that ARE NOT WHAT MY STORY IS ABOUT. I want to put that to rest now, so I wish for everyone that reads this or knows my story to like this review so potential readers can see this! The reason people are upset is because early on I wanted to have an MC that would show growth! I made him like a kid in a candy shop with his new world, trusting and honest, and most certainly not a pervert. There was a single incident where he saw Tsunade, but he was a teenager and it was awkward for him! As for what happens to him without spoiling anything, he learns better! I mean it's not even 40 chapters into the story, and these people were getting upset and saying I am a trash author at less than 10 chapters because of me going and having the MC act overwhelmed by being in a fantasy world he watched a lot! End rant, but man I was really upset about this, and at the time of this writing I am still upset by this and everytime I look back on it I will probably have a sour taste in my mouth because I can't do anything (As far as I know) about the tags this one person put for my story. I feel so defeated as an author that I don't know what to do.

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Travelling My Favorite Worlds!

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1amlord
1amlordLv21amlord

good character dialogue

InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13InterPlanarGod

any way to fix the tags that were falsely placed?

Dragonwine
DragonwineLv6Dragonwine

With or without tags i Will try it once good luck with your novel

RotoRikimaru
RotoRikimaruLv13RotoRikimaru

It would be interesting i

RotoRikimaru
RotoRikimaruLv13RotoRikimaru

Srry, if you made a story with those tags being the base of ur mc development, no?

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

...does that mean the op wouldn't be op?

j0sejalap3n0
j0sejalap3n0Autorj0sejalap3n0

Yes and no. In some worlds/dimensions he will be OP, in others he will be weak. It's all going to be a balancing act

HansTheCool:...does that mean the op wouldn't be op?
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

Dammit, that really sucks, I love op mcs but I guess I won't find that here

j0sejalap3n0:Yes and no. In some worlds/dimensions he will be OP, in others he will be weak. It's all going to be a balancing act
j0sejalap3n0
j0sejalap3n0Autorj0sejalap3n0

Sorry to hear that. I wish you luck finding a story you like though as I don't like situations like Dragonball Z happening.

HansTheCool:Dammit, that really sucks, I love op mcs but I guess I won't find that here
Casual_Vanze
Casual_VanzeLv6Casual_Vanze

You are basically saying that you are drawing a horrible picture, then making small fixes until it looks average and calling it improvement!? That is not how it works dum* as*

TheDemonNazI
TheDemonNazILv4TheDemonNazI

Not gonna lie. I ignored this story just because those tags are there. Someone needs to fix them.