Item: Failed.
Rating: 5

LoreleyyAuthor6yr

2018-11-07 08:07

Hey everyone, Author here. I just wanted to thank everyone who has read the story so far, I really appreciate the support! I will try my best to upload chapters on a daily basis but mostly don't count on it. Please let me know if I made any spelling mistakes here and there or if something didn't make sense. The feedback really helps me improve and I really hope you all enjoy the story!

Failed.

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