Hello, Author. The story is somewhat identical to most other system stories, but that does not mean that this can't become a good story. There is quite a lot of grammatical errors in each chapter. It can be quite hard to read from time to time. I suggest that you find yourself a good editor in order to make sure that you don't have all of these grammatical errors. If you get an editor you would be sure to get quite a lot more readers as well.
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