Review Detail of Lord_of_Potatoes in Napoleon's Corpse

So far so good! Superb sentence structure and flow, very immersive descriptions and obviously written by someone who's done their historical research properly. The author's strong sense of detail is a strength as it pulls the reader into 1800's London and doesn't let go. The first two chapters read a bit slow, but things really picked up from Chapter 3. The story continues to be engaging and the characters vibrantly alive. Good job!