Obligatory shameless 5 star review. Hey guys, this is my first ever story.... of literally anything. I'm a fan of the genre and so I decided to try my hand at writing one! It's mostly for fun but I'd love to hear any and all feedback. You literally cannot be too harsh, I'm a ******** masochist. I love it. Anyways hope you guys enjoy!
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MÖGENA comment so far on improving your writing is to keep writing. Go back occasionally when you're in a different headspace and reread your work. If you feel the need to change/refine how or what you've written, make note of it and add it into newer chapters. Your writing is good so far but there is room to improve. At this point momentum and a sense of joy n accomplishment is the strongest foundation.
Thanks for the review! I realized after writing the first few chapters that I needed to work on world building before I release any more. Please give my chapters criticism in the future!
Rhia_reader:**. My favorite genre too!