Review Detail of wuxiagurl in Relentless Overlord General

I can't understand this story at all. The story is rushed and the happenings didn't have any logic at all. No explanation to the happenings in the story. The exchanges of characters and plot events are horrid too. There's a story and although cliche' it is still quite acceptable, but story development is basically scrap. As I was reading it, I always had a thought like, "what the heck? " "How did it come to this? " "did the logic makes sense". At least when writing a story, make it more believable. If there os an effect there should be a cause and of course the process. I've read many online novels that i've lost count of it and i can say so far, this is one of the poorly written ones.