Review Detail of Zeno in Narutoverse: Cultivation Style

the idea of the story is good, but it was not well taken, some parts that I can not understand, the MC talks about the multiverse, the cultivation, etc., to someone who has only known for a little time and has not earned his confidence, that should be said almost at the end of the novel, about the multiverse, etc. The MC should be more cautious and calculating, have everything well planned, even if he has lived many years, still acts as a young man, etc. I also think it would have been better if I had come to the world of Naruto in the era that the villages were forming and it was easier for them to form their country, etc., in the place where they would locate the Uzumakis and could recruit them. to join him. I do not know if I explained it well Thank you