I have read like all of the Naruto series and generally don't read fanfics, but I decided to give this one a shot. I like the detail; it's neither too much nor too little. The first chapters have set the novel up well with a nice concept behind it. The author could have fleshed out more details in some areas, but that would be my personal preference of liking a lot of details. I don't know how the system will work out for Yuuki, but I would be careful about making the novel more about the system than character development. Honestly, I could care less about the system at this point. I'm more curious about the characters and the plot. Sensei, please keep up the writing. Please don't disappoint me by stopping!!!
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