The novel follows in line with the traditional system story archetype present in this site. It distinguishes itself a bit with the comprehensiveness of its system and the raw amount of applications the system has. This allows the novel to have the potential to move many ways, which gives it a promising future. The grammar is above average for this site, as is the diction, sentence structure, and flow. Overall, a nice read.
chibi_chan
Liked it!
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