The story is good overall and isquite refreshing to the eye especially that its a girl(boy) MC. The only I don't like or those that need improments are: =The sentence structure - Improper use of Capital letters =ITS YURI (hoping for a man to woman relationship even a reverse harem because these kind of things are rare for novels) =The status can be a bit tiring and confusing but I got used to it
MrKag
Liked it!
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