Review Detail of NineNetherBird in A Sacrifice to the Water God

It's written very well. The first person view is used perfectly and makes me feel what she is feeling and going through. There is also a deep description of characters and world with no lose ends. The only thing that bugs me is that the chapters are really long. I haven't read enough yet to make a final judgement, but at the moment it is good and I will definitely continue to read to see how it turns out.