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This story held much more material for a first chapter than any other new novels in the list... I will say that the author should have posted the first chapter as a prologue instead of a real chapter, though I want to say.... what a great world building.... The author introduced more multiple characters and their titles in just 1st paragraph that it makes it easier to remember than, and I know that they have significant in the story and won't be ignored 2nd chapter onward. The character has a way with writing convo's, but unlucky me, having an insignificant brain, I couldn't understand who was saying what. Though I have to say that the author did a great work in the novel, I would suggest him to remove that gender-bender thing, as I hate trap. P.S. knowing there are multiple gods with different title and a system just like the "When a Mage Revolts"... it will be a good D&D novel. I just wish the Author doesn't drop it!!

The System Is A Shameless Swindler!

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Thonk 4 support reely appreciation much. Lol Sorry if its hard for you on convos just look back at the order of the sentences so if Shi Xianghou says : "You're an inanimate object" He's A then System-san will reply "You're a virgin" He's B. So use it like that name the first person A and the second person B if there are convos with a speech after the other. Im trying to not complicate it lol