Gideon

I like how light it feels when I read this story. Honestly it's a bit slow on the first few chapters but then it starts to develop it's story. Honestly it's a little too stingy for the chapter length which is a good and a bad thing on this more ish novel.

I can't wait to see more about it. It's even better if the author tidies it up a little bit because it looks kinda messy for now. Other than that, I have nothing worth mentioning.

Heya, I'm this book's author. Because I'm a new writer, I have almost no experience on writing novel before. I'd like to know if there's a room for improvement for me. PS: I haven't do another round of editing on older version. I planned to do it once it's done.

It's kinda short. I wish it has more duration into it. I like the story in itself. Definitely worth to wait if it's not too long ;)

thanks dude

It's a neat novel there. I somehow think it's similar to one novel that I used to read back then in 2014. It truly brings back my old memory. Great work. Keep it up!

thanks a lot. I got that suggestion a lot from my forum as well. I'll improve it on future content.

Thanks, I'll work on my English :)

It reminds me of a kind of water world game I've played. As for the story and the other aspects are well thought of. It's a good job you've done there.

It's an interesting transmigration novel. I hope it may entertain me long enough unlike some other novels out there. Well, I like the concept that the author trying to put here tbh. Can't wait for more!