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TheCrow

TheCrow

Lv5

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2017-11-11 BeigetretenTunisia
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  • TheCrow
    TheCrow2 years ago
    Kommentiert

    I'm glad to hear that. I'm well and I hope you are too! Stay strong.

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf ThomschK

    Man, you really have no idea how rare it is to see a constructive criticism instead of full-on hate or insults and disapproval, which is warranted but still... Anyway, I really, really appreciate you writing this and I am well aware that the story has many faults and I think it wouldn't be possible to go back and fix things little by little, especially since I'm currently have other stories to write and the time is simply not enough. One more point I want to make is that this story was my first ever, and when I started, I literally knew nothing about writing and grammar. I just wrote what I liked so, in a way, it's a wish fulfillment. I wrote it after a long day at school and I did not think way ahead in terms of over-arching plots, if you know what I mean. Thank you for reading so far into the story and giving a fair perspective. If you are interested, I am actually writing the B route of this story(57 chapters out already) and it is free on Webnovel. It has a different plot but there are recurring characters and the world is also Astria but more fleshed out. I see it as a second attempt in directing the story in a better and less-faulty way. PS: I apologize for my grammar, especially in the early chapters of A route. English is my third language and I've mostly learnt it through Internet so I always strive to improve and give the best reading experience. Thank you again and I hope you find a good story that entertains you. Good day to you!

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf sirangle

    I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading!

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Abc_123_2544

    Aww... sorry! It will never happen agai-- nevermind...

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Aloe_Jason

    Thanks for the review. Honestly, it has been a while since I've seen a constructive one. I'm glad you enjoyed my story, flawed as it is. and I will try my best to offer more description. I wish you a great day!

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf RebelKid

    No, it's not.

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf tmfr

    Route A will resume soon.

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf tmfr

    I got covid but I have recovered! This B route will continue in this month

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Storyteller_0

    I'm surprised and elated that you like it, considering how scuffed it is at the begining, especially. Thanks for reading

  • TheCrow
    TheCrow3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Victor_Reyes_4721

    5 years ago, indeed...

Once Human, Now a Parasite β

Arthur Bilgart was a successful and vastly wealthy businessman on Earth. However, he was kidnapped and tortured by his wife, Claudia, who was after everything he owned. He was tortured and isolated from the world for no less than a year before miserably dying. But death wasn't the end for he was reincarnated into a parasite in a foreign world. Volume 1: The Blood Purge (Chp 1 to 29) Volume 2 : The Mysterious Bottle (Chp 30 to 43) Volume 3 : The Bloated Murderer (Chp 44 to 65) Volume 4: Ruination (Pt1): Single-Minded Pursuit (Chp 66 to 86) Volume 4 : Ruination (Pt2): Feast of Lies and Sea of Spies (Chp8 to 128) Volume 5 : The Shadow Keep Penitentiary(Pt1): 'Why was the goose sad?'(Chp129 to ?) If you're interested in the premise, I will give some exposition on what to expect. First and foremost, the story, especially at the beginning, can have a slow pace to flesh out the world and characters. The plot will follow the parasite's second life in a new world in which Magic exists. Rather than focusing too much on non-stop and nonsensical fights, there will be a lot of focus on Arthur's psychological issues, his motives and beliefs. His views on the new world and opinions on moral relativism, the ruling aristocracy, the study of historical records and so on... Instead of a direct plot from beginning to end (Such as the generalized 'Defeat the Demon King), this story is more about self-discovery and the unravelling of ancient mysteries and forgotten history. It is about the character development of not only Arthur but other characters and how their actions affect the world. Arthur isn't inherently noble or unconditionally just, but he also isn't purely driven by lunacy or evil-oriented intentions. The MC is neither OP nor pitifully weak. This is not about someone reincarnated into a world just to become an undefeated force that simply kills everyone. There will be chapters dedicated to Lore or the travails of supporting characters. There are relatively detailed maps that I've created myself, which can be found here: The maps contain SPOILERS about regions and locations. https://ibb.co/xDPk4zz https://ibb.co/smKDgds There will be a System, one which isn't overly-complex nor too simplistic. In the beginning, at least, it is more of a visual and numerical representation of the MC's growth as he learns more about his Race and what it is capable of. Without delving into any details, the following are what you will find in this story: Exploring the world; Meeting new people, discovering fascinating cultures, deepening one's understanding of existence's history, delving into Politics. At some points, the story will be dark and quite disturbing. Chapters are between 1500 and 3000 words. One last thing: I'm not a native English-speaker, therefore, my grammar isn't flawless. I try my best to make everything coherent and enjoyable, but I might make a mistake or two along the way. If you notice anything, be sure to let me know and I will fix it. Apologies in advance and I hope you like the story.

TheCrow · Fantasy
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157 Chs

The Misadventures of Rodrick and his Assistant

Con Artist, Rodrick Dick, suddenly found himself in an unfamiliar city. Before he could get his bearing, he was conscripted to the so-called Grand Plan by a System and forced to underego utterly nonsensical and absurd missions. Instead of the expected magical powers or godly abilities, Rodrick was only provided with an Articicial Intelligence assistant that, by his words, was 'a useless piece of ****'. Follow Rodrick as he finds himself in the most ridiculous situations either by trying to outsmart the System or follow the missions to survive. Day 1 'Kill a sentinet living being', Day ? 'Piss on the King's throne'. "You're ***** kidding me, System! How is pissing on the throne going to save the world?! You just want me to die!" "The Grand Plan is mysterious and important, User. Good luck."- A.I Assitant

TheCrow · Fantasy
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Re;Hell Gate

Leiu, 24-years-old, is a person who is struggling between finding a decent job with regular income and providing care for his family. After spending a long time working part-time jobs, he finally has enough money to buy the new VRMMO game that's about to be released. This is a story about his adventures and progress in this new game. Author's note: Be aware, this story contains drama, tragedy, horror and so on, so I advise to think twice before reading it or else you might regret it later. WARNING: If you are not a fan of the stories which contain overpowered Main Character, then there is no need to read this. PS: This story has a direct relation with Once, Human, Now a Parasite. However, you're not forced to read the two stories to understand the plot but it'll still clarify a lot of things later on. PS2 : This story relies on readers, I'll put a pole and let you vote on what the MC does in certain situations. The pole will be back only when I reach where I stopped in the old version.

TheCrow · Spiele
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6 Chs

Life As a Servant

Sometimes...you can cry until there's nothing wet in you. You can scream and curse to where your throat rebels and ruptures. You can pray, all you want, to whatever god you think will listen. And, still, it makes no difference. This is the story of a sick 19-year-old young man called Bin, who tasted despair ever since he was young. He became numb to the cruelty and unfairness of life yet he still lives, hoping that his little sister will live a life much better than his own. With not much time left to live due to his illness, Bin tries his best to gain some money for his sister before he leaves this godforsaken world. It all began with a coincidental meeting... two fates intertwined together, one was a poor and dying youngster and the other was a spoiled and childish girl. You can check my discord if you want to ask questions about the story. https://discord.gg/49aFUmN This story is only a stress relief and would only post when I'm free, the main focus would be my main story. WARNING: I'm just writing this for FUN, so whether it has some cliché moments or anything of the sort, Do not blame me for you have been warned. PS: For some special information, this story does not have much action, so if that is what you are looking for then I suggest you do not read. It has mainly slice of life/ Romance/ Comedy( a bit as I'm still a beginner in that) / Tragedy (not all of it but can be sad at times). Have a good read if you ever decide to try it out. Peace

TheCrow · Allgemein
4.6
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