Checked for this comment straight away, fellow osrs degenerate gamer 🥸

Bruh aint they 14?

Yooo yall are mad asf, Its just an opinion, don’t have to get mad about it lmao, also author encouraging people to hatE on a reviewer/reader because the review is mostly negative is kind of cringe and in poor taste. I dont get why you used chinese names either when you are releasing to western audiences but its just an opinion and i dont expect you to change the novel because of it.

Doesn’t have to be, Yin and yang is fundamentally apart of chinese culture, so it being refrenced all the time isnt a suprise. It’s a CN and they have their tropes, as does americans and everyone else.

Sure enjoy away, I was merely stating my opinion. Which the comment section is used for no? If they don’t like it, they sinply ignore it. You should try it out yourself.

man, this translation is pure mtl level garbage. What a let down.

Perfect analogy tbh, couldn't of said it better myself.

I feel the same way, I enjoyed the authors other works as a past time but never expected a lot since it was meant to be a 1 dimensional OP MC and that's it. This one is just lazy and riding the coattails of there previous success, it is a rather big disappointment for I had thought that with such a strong start, the author would come out of it better than ever, ready to write more stories with a bit more depth and yet here we are, another rinse and repeat, copy and paste. Disappointing is about all I could say about this novel. Maybe they are hungry to keep the previous momentum of other writings idk, what I do know is my journey with said author will be ending here although brief my time was well spent, happy reading all.

Thats not lying, thats called a plot hole.

mate you seriously need to stop praising his name, it is cringe asf that his name is 'Storm Wind' unironically. Yet you patting yourself on the back every time he meets a new player and they introduce themselves is even more cringe

I honestly felt the same way when reading the first and second chapters, incredibly and unnecessarily long winded. The sentences do make sense if you forgo some errors that are prevalent but the problem is they don’t flow well, I really liked the concept and wanted to give this novel a chance but I cannot bare to sit through more of these if every chapter is built on 1 sentence being reworded 10 times. Might have to revisit at a later date and see if the author decided to clean up the early chapters.

When posting that comment I was yet to have read such a masterpiece, my favourite novel to have ever read on this site.

dude you're cringe asf, stop projecting yourself onto me you fucking weirdo. Keep telling yourself that buddy I can't be assed with losers like you who want attention. ptui I spit on you.

kinda disappointed but it seems to be heading that way

I couldn't last 3 episodes of his absolutely terrible character, the shouting was just so freaking cancer.

the English language buddy.

So many grammatical errors and weird sentence structuring in the first few paragraphs is a really bad first impression to be giving a would be reader. I've had to waste so much time reading too many disappointing novels that never have nearly enough proof reading before publishing their chapters. I'd usually give you more of a chance but looking at the amount of chapters released and the fact that so many mistakes remain, yet its gone premium? No thank you, cannot believe people can charge others for illiterate garbage, it is so infuriating and honestly I am so sick of seeing it.

But it is*, was is past tense, so that wouldn't make sense.

Homie how is my logic flawed when I gave you sources of reference and perfect examples where you are wrong and yet you still are bent on being right? I'm down to debate but it seems that you and I (and many others) have a differing opinion on what it means when being used to describe a fictitious being in novels like these so ill just leave it at that.

everyone's entitled to there own opinion and I respect that, I somewhat agree with you in the sense of the being judged equally but that still doesn't make it okay to belittle another for there way of making money to feed there families. Its tough out there, I'm not saying you should go out and choose a girl/guy that has slept with the entire population, but to look past social norms that look down on those sorts of people and try respect people for who they are as a person and not who they lay with at night.