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Poor virgins souls 😂😂😂
I would say training instead of cultivation, feel like he is gardening
Ginny would follow the line
it still feels weird, just say : give us a hand. nah?
yep
sorry mate, from France
you can find it on Spacebattles
This fan fic is good but at least tell where you can find the original fanfic or at least who is the original author, it's called stealing property. Just in case, the actual author us Coeus and you can find it on "Spacebattles forum."
I don't want to be harsh or whatever, the idea is interesting, how it's implemented is quite rushy. Some inconsistency but it's ok, I would say as an excuse, it's a fanfic. What broke my heart was grammar, spelling and tense. There are some online correctors that exist. You can try chatgpt to help you. Not being a jerk, just trying to give you some advice to get better.
adapted*
my bad, it's " as the father of itachi
he is Itachi's father