topak
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addicted to fanfic lol
2017-11-18 BeigetretenGlobal
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topak17hKommentiertLenons are garbage, only hentaibgarbage read this bs, it ruins immersion when reading
AN: Some readers don't like lemons and yet they are reading and complaining.😅 I mean, after all the tags and the mentions of what to expect in the first chapters + The mention of Slice of life in the Author's note in bold letters, why complain? My stories are all slow and focus on each day and every character as they go through daily life. I take my time with sex scenes and relationship development. Some sex scenes spans over 3 chs. I write everything in details. I thought it was clear by now. Anyway, don't comment if you don't like slow pace or harem, just leave.- topak3dKommentiertCh 36 Forcing my hand
- topak6dKommentiert
So a boring plot, no syrong opponent
"Here I am, thinking I'm going to mentor the future Spider-Man," he laughed to himself. "But for now, Peter isn't even born yet. I'm still stuck in 1947, and the plot doesn't kick off until 1962! I've got 15 years to kill... well, not literally!" Jonathan chuckled again, realizing the irony of his situation. "I guess I'll figure it out as I go along!" - topak12dKommentiertCh 30 Pictures
- topak1mthKommentiertCh 199 199 Marvel Zombies: A senseless fight?!
- topak1mthKommentiert"Lorna, Lorna Dane."
- topak2mthKommentiert
Again bs, op mc scared of fckng joker, he has lady death too, he made all character dumb and a joke and make joker op
Despite his relatively low power level, he wasn't a foe that could be easily matched. Not in the traditional way, at least. Then you add in his uncanny ability to cheat Death. And his horrifically unique mind, perspective, and willpower. - topak2mthKommentiert
Thats bs, making joker that scary, thera multi verse, hes not the laughing bat, stupid author , he made dc a joke
The bad 'press' had even spread to Ivy's Ivy. The girls (and Freeze) had been forced to close early tonight. The Joker's reputation was just that fearsome. The normal folk who visited my bar heeded it for obvious reasons. But even my regulars — confident in my ability to enforce the bar's neutrality — weren't willing to risk getting caught in the crossfire. Not when it came to the Joker. - topak2mthKommentiertCh 101 Title at the end
- topak2mthKommentiert
Why call it gateof babylon? , just call it item box
This 'Gate of Babylon' is not the same as the other 'Gate of Babylon'. - topak2mthKommentiert
Call this bs
There was no pleasure without risk. For the Joker, it wasn't just about causing chaos; it was about having a Batman trying to stop him. Two entities with different ideals, pursue their own goals and clash with each other. - topak2mthKommentiertCh 148 Tough decisions call for a Harem King (r-18)
- topak2mthKommentiertCh 147 The shameful decision of two women fallen into lust!
- topak2mthKommentiertCh 54 Chapter 54
- topak2mthKommentiertCh 6 Chapter 6 Features
- topak2mthKommentiertCh 16 Chapter 16: The Joker
- topak3mthKommentiert
Stupid plot, why not kill him
"Kyomu Shidan. This erases memory. I just erased your memories. Although I am not sure how much is erased... I reckon it is quite a bit.", Bruce says and then jumps away, narrowly dodging the sword that was about to impale him. - topak3mthKommentiert
Whats with thos bs
"I am vengeance! I am the night! I am ... Batman!" - topak3mthAntwortet auf PJChicken
And you thonk your smart?
Did you not ask yourself, what happened with the trainign he did with Giovanni Zatara? Why does he suddenly not know who Ra's al Ghul is? Why would a man that is so paranoid like him, allow himself to be drugged? Like come on! Piss off, you're not smart enough to read this. - topak3mthKommentiert
Just drop it its stupid
Did you not ask yourself, what happened with the trainign he did with Giovanni Zatara? Why does he suddenly not know who Ra's al Ghul is? Why would a man that is so paranoid like him, allow himself to be drugged? Like come on! Piss off, you're not smart enough to read this.