…wow, i have to say, you applying char development made it 100x better than other fics ive read

Saburo or yorinobu?

Istg, this gave me trauma of the highest order ☠️

Holy sheeet, i could feel the emotions bubbling up from him, got goosebumps reading this

It’s a terrible day for rain, so to speak.

oogly googly moogly

I CAN AT MOST ONLY TOLERATE HAVING YOR AS THE LAST AND FINAL WIFE meaning only 2.) very much how the dynamic between the original twilight and the other agent vs yor which can give a good feel for the plot, but the other female characters are a no go

kinda agree on this one, while Luffy really sets it apart as the character we all know and love, i do think joyboy would be a better hero name as its a representation of a persons beliefs or character imo

but what about... the queen?

somebody's going to die tonight

seems familiar... *cough cough* ace

guide of the dead

gojo: nuh uh

...

minus, the updates, everything's a 5-star rating from me. i dont think ive encountered this type of simulation system in which theres a plot device on why it was given to the mc, which creates a good background for the world in itself, and the story telling even in the simulation is pretty impressive, and how the story revolves around the simulated and irl interactions. though the caveat would probably be on how the mc will manage the harem tag because of the current list of heroines from the simulated an real world, its going to be an interesting experience to see how the author will write their stuff for the story. if you want a fic with good writing and story, i suggest you give this a try.

alexa play I really want to stay at your house - cyberpunk edgerunners fr

bro was in his canon event :"(