coastal_redwoods34

Very well written story, I get that it's still early so to soon to judge in it's entirety, but the writer isn't struggling to tie in multiple source pieces without breaking the world building. Again, very well written, grammar and character's have enough depth that you actually remember their names and characteristics. Very much so looking forward to the next chapter!

I would say the strongest point of the book is how entertaining he writes conversations. I'm definitely guilty of flying through chapters on other stories to "get to the good part," but the conversations here are so witty I actually stay around to read them all. I definitely would recommend this book to anyone looking for a great world building story, but also an even better log of conversations.

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Another one . . .

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Bruh . . . Where are you?

New cover art work? I thought the last one was incredible, really gave off his arrogance lol

see you guys in a month

yeah it's getting a little weird lol

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