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Asakuya_25293h agoKommentiertTFTC
- Asakuya_25296h agoVerschickt
Why do you alter the chapters?... If you want to rewrite a text paragraph, delete it and write it anew and not alter in in another chapter. You have done it twice already. I bet you write it by using AI. I have no problem with it, but please proof read it also least once. The story is awesome but as I write it before, you have to be more meticulous. Thanks for the story.
- Asakuya_25296h agoKommentiert
Why do you alter the chapters? If you want to rewrite a paragraph, delete it and write it anew and not alter in in another chapter. You have done it twice already. I bet you write it by using AI. I have no problem with it, but please proof read it also least once. The story is awesome but as I said you have to be more meticulous. Thanks for the story.
- Asakuya_2529a day agoVerschickt
The story is exceptional so far, and for those who haven't read it yet, I "highly" recommend it. Thank you for this excellent story you posted.
- Asakuya_25293d agoVerschickt
Nothing more needs to be said, it's peak! The only complaint is that there are not enough chapters! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
- Asakuya_25293d agoVerschickt
The story is exceptional so far, and for those who haven't read it yet, I "highly" recommend it. Thank you for this excellent story you posted.
- Asakuya_25293d agoVerschickt
The story is exceptional so far, and for those who haven't read it yet, I "highly" recommend it. Thank you for this excellent story you posted.
- Asakuya_25299d agoKommentiert
TFTC
- Asakuya_25299d agoVerschickt
The story is exceptional so far, and for those who haven't read it yet, I "highly" recommend it. Thank you for this excellent story you posted.
- Asakuya_252910d agoKommentiert
When will you update again??