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Kio_Vesarius

Kio_Vesarius

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2024-12-21 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Kio_Vesarius
    Kio_Vesarius7d ago
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    honestly it’s wasted potential, it has so much good plot point if you think about it. it’s ruined by inconsistencies and Chinese sh*ts, like the way the author of the ff portrayed mai shiranui he buyed her from the shop then disappeared the next chapters, what’s the point? and the system point doesn’t make sense at all. overall it’s not readable by the standards of normal human.

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    Kio_Vesariusa year ago
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    The first chapter is fantastic but after his rebirth(reincarnation whatever it is) is kinda lacking you know, in the start before he got the God's blessings I thought he's kinda prideful, arrogant, but nah he just got beaten and kinda acting like a child like bro you're not a child(maybe you are) but u have your past life memory act like it, maybe if your memory is fragments I would understand but not it's kinda disappointing