Lyra_Rian

A masterfully written fantasy with immersive world-building and strong character development, Daughters, Swords & Dragons delivers a riveting tale of rebellion and power. What truly sets this book apart is its engaging storytelling—each sentence is crafted with purpose, making it easy to lose yourself in the struggle for survival and justice. The emotional depth, rich lore, and thrilling conflicts create a dynamic, page-turning experience that fantasy lovers will adore.♡♡♡

The character development in the early chapters is strong, and the pacing is spot on, building the story in a compelling way. The detailed narrative really enhances the world-building, making the setting feel vivid and immersive. (ФωФ) Plus, with action scenes beginning to emerge, I’m excited to see where the story goes next. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!♡(ﾟ∀ﾟ 三 ﾟ∀ﾟ) ♡

hahah I knew it ( ￣▽￣)

Oh no... ！Σ(￣□￣;)

This is an interesting story with well-done character introductions and development, along with solid world-building and pacing. Speaking of pacing, the first few chapters were short with some cut-offs, but it actually worked well—it kept me hooked all the way to the latest chapter. Keep cooking up those great chapters, author-sama!🔥 (ﾟ∀ﾟ 三 ﾟ∀ﾟ) 🔥

I—... well, that was an interesting way to twist a reader. Everything was going smoothly until I hit a bad ending just when I thought I had it all figured out. (ﾟＡﾟ) I guess I should’ve expected a twist like this on my first try reading this kind of book. But surprisingly, it was unique and thoroughly entertaining! o(>∀<*)o Definitely worth the read!

Wow... just wow! (ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟДﾟ)ﾞ? The first chapter was incredibly captivating and well-written. The pacing was smooth, and the character development unfolded naturally, each element surprising me in the best way. The story hooked me so much, I almost leveled up to level 3 just from reading! 🤣 If you’re into this genre, don’t wait—start reading now before you miss out! You won’t regret it! 🔥🔥

((o(^∇^)o)) Wow, thank you so much for such an incredible review! Your kind words really made my day! 😊 I’m thrilled to hear that you’re enjoying the story and that Arlon’s journey is keeping you hooked. I love how you’re pacing yourself with the chapters—adding suspense for yourself is such a fun way to read! Don’t worry, I’ll keep the updates coming (no pressure, right? 😅) so you won’t have to wait too long for more twists and turns. Your support and enthusiasm mean the world to me. I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on the upcoming chapters, and I’ll definitely keep doing my best to make the story even better. Thanks again for the encouragement and for recommending the novel to others—it truly means a lot! Happy reading! ♡♡♡

The first chapter feels a bit confusing due to the rapid introduction of characters, leaving readers with little time to catch their breath. While I understand the intention to create a tragic start, the fast pace can be overwhelming. Some chapters have messy pacing that could benefit from re-editing. However, with a little refinement in scene transitions and pacing, the story has potential and can be a great read!

The first chapter is already intriguing, with great pacing and a compelling narrative that draws the reader in. I thought the story was going to leave me hanging with that 'oh là là' scene, but I'm definitely hooked!♡♡